This' what my personal statement's going to sound like but i reckoned it still needs further modification so anyone pleassseee help me out can?

I'm not from a rich family nor a high-class background. I had been taught the importance of money and how great they play a role in life. I bever doubt that everyone loves money just as I do. For generations, my family had been dealing with business. Most of my cousins that had graduated were also dealing with courses like accounting, finance, banking and business admin. It truly had affected me since I was young. In my 19years of life, I had come to apprehend a fundmental principle. This world is very realistic. Life is all about money and I reckoned the best and fastest way to earn money is to relate myself to business. It takes a bigger risk in the business world, I know but what is not risky in this world. Everyone is finding the best and fastest way to finish their studies and start working including myself as I know I cannot forever ask money from my parents. As I grow up, it's not only myself to be fed but also I have to take care of my parents. That's why I reckoned finance is very important. I reckoned choosing a good course and a good university is definitely a good start to a better job. I choose Finance Mathematics instead of Finance or Accounting and Finance or banking owing to the speciality of this course. I still get to study about Finance and get to touch on Maths which is my favourite subject. Of course, I wouldn't know what awaits me in the future but I reckoned taking Finance Maths is a good start. I fathom that tis is a tough course to take but I'm already prepared to acceot this challenge. I really hope that this great opportunity can be given to me to pursue my dreams in life. Thank you.